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Jorler

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eh not that bad

it's a good loop but you need to make it a bit more orginal it was to predicable to boring now my tips would be spice up the beat tweak the rythm and over all just try somehing new with your next pice but i do think that with some more work you could become really go at this listen to Bafna and see what he dose it's really good so try to see what you can do with the next one

paalanboy responds:

it's meant to be simple

amazing

the beat was perfect the rythm was awsome over all perfect keep up the good work but try to add something unexpected it was a bit to predictable

SquattingDog88101 responds:

Right on. Ill keep that in mind for my next submission.

not bad

its good but i find techno should be more up beat yours was more smooth

nice

the end really confused me i have to say

Respect

the rhtythm is original and fresh well timed and over all a very good job one thing is the begining and end are a bit to off of the rest of the song not somethingi normaly hear but over all the this is some amazing work and the only adice i can give you is to try to make your rhythm and beat work up to what you want in the mid area but over all i think it's awsome

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