Jorler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[LALPHABET]

No, please the chromosome.

artistunknown responds:

That doesn't seem very constructive. Imma flag as abusive :D

[Penicorn Fury [NAC 12]]

I was expecting some thing intense, but this blew my mind. you did a really good job on this one.

Bafana responds:

Thanks mate.

[And Curious Volume]

good job

i really like how it flowed but it seemed to constent it really only changed once at 50 secs so try to add a bit more diferent tone lets call it next time

Mushraven responds:

Yeah I know what you mean now that I listen back on it. Feels way too hurried but then again that was kind of the point to hit hard with short duration. Thanks for the review, it has helped a lot!!!

[8 bitt rugermuller]

eh not that bad

it's a good loop but you need to make it a bit more orginal it was to predicable to boring now my tips would be spice up the beat tweak the rythm and over all just try somehing new with your next pice but i do think that with some more work you could become really go at this listen to Bafna and see what he dose it's really good so try to see what you can do with the next one

paalanboy responds:

it's meant to be simple

[Shave While I Rave]

amazing

the beat was perfect the rythm was awsome over all perfect keep up the good work but try to add something unexpected it was a bit to predictable

SquattingDog88101 responds:

Right on. Ill keep that in mind for my next submission.